IELTS Essay # 79 - Nowadays many adults play video games. Is it a good or a bad development? Give your opinion and include relevant examples from your own experience.


Essay # 79

Nowadays many adults play video games. Is it a good or a bad development? Give your opinion and include relevant examples from your own experience.

It is pretty common for adults to play video games nowadays in their leisure time. Some people don’t think this is a good practice. I personally believe there’s no harm in playing video games, and this essay shall further elaborate this opinion.

It would be wrong to believe that video games are only for children. Few adults rarely get to do anything playful after work and family life set in. Gaming adults have a daily chance to engage in playful behaviour, which helps you enjoy life and be happier. Whether it’s a realistic video game like Call of Duty or a highly imaginative video game like World of Warcraft, using your imagination to put yourself in the mindset of your character and their world is also a highly stimulating, creative exercise for your brain. This stress-free activity makes them look forward to getting back to play, making life interesting, even in a small way.

Apart from the above mentioned factors, couples can engage in gaming together, making both the partners feel lively and light-hearted, thereby strengthening their bond. Adult gaming activities can be considered disadvantageous if they become an addiction and get out of hand. But, unlike children, I think that the adults know better about having a balanced life perspective between gaming and other important activities. So there are really no major drawbacks here.

To conclude I don’t think adults playing video games is a bad development.
Playing video games is a great way to de-stress from the demands of everyday life and do something that you enjoy just for the sake of enjoying it.

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IELTS Essay # 79 - Nowadays many adults play video games. Is it a good or a bad development? Give your opinion and include relevant examples from your own experience. IELTS Essay # 79 - Nowadays many adults play video games. Is it a good or a bad development? Give your opinion and include relevant examples from your own experience. Reviewed by Devanshi on October 05, 2016 Rating: 5

2 comments:

  1. hello I have a doubt
    It is emphasised that there should be a single main idea per paragraph is it necessary ?
    if so why are there multiple ideas in the body paragraph 2
    Best regards,

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    1. In order to not make the essay seem partial (by not even considering the other side of the argument), I have mentioned about why some might think playing video games is disadvantageous. Usually when you have to choose a side in an essay, it does better to give little consideration to the side you aren't favouring, showing the examiner that you are writing a broad minded essay. There should only be a couple of sentences regarding this, and they should be towards the end of the essay. After writing that, you can again bring the examiner's attention to what you stand for and why, inspite of there being other opinions about the topic.

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