In this model answer, I have highlighted the aspects important for getting a score higher than 7 bands in IELTS Writing.
Bold & Underline – Writing Task 1 Format
Blue – Linking Words
Red – Complex Sentences
Letter # 31
You moved to a new country
and you want to write a letter to your previous co-worker. In your letter,
include:
- Where did you go and describe your feelings.
- What are you doing there? (a job)
- Invite your friend to come
Opening
salutation
Dear Tina,
Introduction
I hope you’re doing
well. I’m sorry I didn’t get a chance to properly say goodbye to you in the rush
of moving to Canada last month for my new job. Now that I have settled in, I thought
of writing to you to tell you about my experience so far.
Body
Paragraph 1 (Task Prompt No. 1)
I’m staying in an apartment
here in Toronto, which is one of the most happening cities in Canada. I
immediately got impressed with the energetic vibe of this city and its people.
Although I haven’t gotten many opportunities for sight-seeing, I did manage to
visit the iconic CN Tower. It is the tallest building in this city full of skyscrapers.
From the observation area in the tower, I could see Niagara Falls, which I’m
planning to visit next.
Body
Paragraph 2 (Task Prompt No. 2)
So let me tell you about
my job here. I work at Costa Design Inc. as a senior graphic designer. Therefore, I have
more responsibilities now, and have to manage a larger team than my previous
job. Moreover, my boss is very knowledgeable and encouraging, and the support
of my friendly co-workers have made my transition very easy.
Body
Paragraph 3 (Task Prompt No. 3)
I would love for you to
come here during your Diwali holidays with your family. I know you guys will love Toronto
and enjoy your time here. Do let me know if you consider.
Concluding
sentence
Please give my regards to your
kids, and do stay in touch. I shall write again.
Ending
Salutation
Love,
Shivangi.
Reviewed by Devanshi
on
November 17, 2020
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