IELTS Letter # 33 - The news company is going to start a new program on TV about a particular place. Write a letter to offer your suggestions on what the program should be like.

Letter # 33

The news company is going to start a new program on TV about a particular place. Write a letter to offer your suggestions on what the program should be like. Include the following in your letter:

– how you know about that place

– what suggestions you would like to make

– why you are offering these suggestions

Dear Sir/Ma'am,

I am thrilled to know that the new season for my favourite show on your channel is finally going to air next month. I’m excited about all the changes you’ve made to the show’s format, and being a dedicated audience, I’d like to offer a few suggestions as well.

I have no doubt that Udaipur, popularly known as ’The City of Lakes’ which is situated in the western Indian state of Rajasthan is the most suitable choice for the show "India's Treasures". When I had visited this city for a wedding, I was fascinated by its magnificent palaces and beautiful lakes. I am certain that your choice would be able to offer the perfect blend of culture, history, and tradition of western India.

However, I wish to make a couple of suggestions that can uplift the ratings of the show further. First, the lack of background music makes the show very dull and boring; I'd suggest you to add a pleasant music track in the background to enhance the viewers' experience. Second, as the show is related to touring India's cities with a common man’s perspective, it would be nice if you include the stories of common man living in the city and their experiences.

I hope you take my suggestions in a positive manner as a fan who is eagerly waiting for the show to start again and succeed. It would be a pleasure watching the beautiful city of Udaipur on screen again and this also could greatly help bring light to this rich, cultural city of India.

Sincerely,

Bhoomi Naik.

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