IELTS Essay # 42 - Nowadays music and newspapers are available online. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such services? Give your own opinion followed by relevant examples.
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Essay # 42
Nowadays
music and newspapers are available online. What are the advantages and
disadvantages of such services? Give your own opinion followed by relevant
examples.
Accelerated technological development
has enabled the physical newspaper’s transformation into e-newspapers. In the
post internet era, the music market has also flourished online. For both these
phenomenon, certain merits and demerits have been observed, and this essay
shall discuss them further in detail.
The internet enables fast transmission
of digital data, and is used by almost everyone nowadays. Since the time many
media companies decided to share their work online, there has been a rampant
demand of news articles and music albums and songs that people want to download
from the internet. Scores of sites now offer music, while hundreds of others
summarise news and this reaches more consumers than ever online. Moreover, since
it’s free, it’s all the more beneficial for the people. However the media
businesses have been said to be fallen on hard times. The problem seems to be
that the internet has expanded the audience for media, but has also destroyed
the market for it.
The media houses have been observed of
not collecting enough of the revenue being generated by their work. Over the
past decade, much of the value created by music and newspapers has benefited
other companies – pirates and respected technology firms alike. Part of the
problem is widespread piracy - unauthorised distribution that doesn't benefit
creators or the companies that invest in them. This dynamic doesn't only hurt
media conglomerates – it creates problems for independent artists and companies
of every size, big and small. This is the biggest disadvantage regarding this
issue as it defeats the core purpose of developing creative content.
To conclude, I’d say one of the most
exciting aspects of the internet is to make information free for all. But when
it starts hindering the growth of newspaper and music industries, and leads to
their decline, I feel strong law enforcements should be executed.
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IELTS Essay # 42 - Nowadays music and newspapers are available online. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such services? Give your own opinion followed by relevant examples.
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Want to do IELTS how to do it not having a good English vocabulary. Please guide me
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Dear Ann Rose,
DeleteFor improving your vocabulary you will have to develop a habit of reading.
Start with light texts like Bollywood gossip articles in newspapers, and novels by Chetan Bhagat. Maintain a vocabulary notebook where you list the words you learn, their meanings, and at least 5 example sentences made by you. Make sure you then use these words as much as you can in daily life for them to blend in your lexicon properly.
Is it better to describe one point in one bp or 2
ReplyDeleteIdeally, it would be better if you mention one point and explain it properly, ending it with a relevant example so that the reader doesn't get the feeling of anything missing in the context. In IELTS, qualitative work is valued more than quantitative. Hope this solves your doubt! :)
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